WilsonMcLeish's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[so_low_solo]

Nice man, do you play the trumpet yourself or did you use samples? Nice chord progression underneath too! Make it longer and you'll have a great tune!

dylanasinbob responds:

Thanks! I play the trumpet, it's all me!

[Melody in C# Major]

Cool ideas, needs a lot more though. Who would rate an unfinished project so highly. It needs some chords and drums, keep working on it.

bluelephan2 responds:

OK. Thank you for listening.

[Azrei XL - Virtual Slap]

Pretty Decent! Nice work on the drum syncopation and effects, there could have been more harmoic modulation in the bass parts. Good overall!

Axel7 responds:

thank you very much!! I'll look into the modulation (I'm still not sure about all the terms lol)

[Calcine Air]

Nice solo section! I like making electronic solos too. Try modulating keys to make it more interesting.

Smitsy responds:

Thanks for the feedback! Ive been experimenting with that on some drafts actually, there should be some usage of it soon ;)

[- Set it off -]

Some cool ideas. I really enjoyed the pads in the background and the beat. You should try modulating keys to generate continued interest, and using volume dynamics to create contrast. Lastly, the sound sort of implies Dorian Minor, but that chord at the end of the melodic motif has a b6 which kind of clashes with the vibe, try raising that weird note up a semitone to the natural 6. Keep getting those ideas out.

Greeksta-69 responds:

Awesome review, thank you. :)

Greeksta

[It Will Never Be The Same]

Cool tune! I liked the key change.

There could have been more melodic and rhythmic development to generate excitement, but that is just a taste thing I guess, overall good, nice guitar!

DamienFleisch responds:

Thank you :) I'll revise it a bit and put the new version up!