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WilsonMcLeish

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Some cool ideas. I really enjoyed the pads in the background and the beat. You should try modulating keys to generate continued interest, and using volume dynamics to create contrast. Lastly, the sound sort of implies Dorian Minor, but that chord at the end of the melodic motif has a b6 which kind of clashes with the vibe, try raising that weird note up a semitone to the natural 6. Keep getting those ideas out.

Greeksta-69 responds:

Awesome review, thank you. :)

Greeksta

Cool tune! I liked the key change.

There could have been more melodic and rhythmic development to generate excitement, but that is just a taste thing I guess, overall good, nice guitar!

DamienFleisch responds:

Thank you :) I'll revise it a bit and put the new version up!

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